Sunday, November 10, 2019
With specific focus on Anthem for Doomed Youth evaluate the methods the poet uses to bring across his convictions, feelings and ideas
ââ¬Å"Who longs to charge and shoot, Do you my laddie.â⬠This jingoistic wartime poem by Jessie Pope ignites Owen's anger at these false impressions of war. This is evident in such poems as Dulce et Decorum est, originally penned towards Pope, hence the initial title, To a Certain Poetess. Owen's ââ¬Å"senses were charredâ⬠at the sight of the ââ¬Å"suffering of the troopsâ⬠, such accusations about the nature of warfare fuelling the malice of his work. Owen never openly retaliates, instead opting to include his resentment towards writers like Pope in his poems. Owen frequently conveys his convictions of lost youth in Anthem For Doomed Youth by referring to ââ¬Å"the hands of boysâ⬠, evidently refusing to acknowledge the maturity of the men. Owen's numerous references to religious symbols heightens the effects of his poems. In Anthem, we hear the ââ¬Å"demented choirs of wailing shells.â⬠Angelic choirs are ironically reversed as Owen negates Christian ritual as being unfitting for those who die amid screaming shells. In Mental Cases, we also bear witness to Biblical images, asking if we are: ââ¬Å"Sleeping, and walk hell But who these hellish?â⬠Owen often compares war to Hell, comparing soldiers to creatures undergoing eternal torment, ââ¬Å"Wherefore rock they, purgatorial shadowsâ⬠. This adds to the created impression of those driven mad by war, as he asks if the ââ¬Å"multitudinous murdersâ⬠these men have committed has doomed them to Hell. Owen insists these soldiers are not to blame, for ââ¬Ëwe' dealt them this ââ¬Å"tormentedâ⬠fate. Anthem is a similar reversal, where Owen utilizes heavenly elements, ââ¬Å"orisonsâ⬠. Yet, these spiritual references are used negatively: the only true regret is the ââ¬Å"holy glimmers of goodbyesâ⬠in the dying soldiers' eyes. The gloriousness of Heaven and God is ignored, extending the distressing impact of the poem on the reader, as similar devilish imagery is used in other poems, such as the gas victim's ââ¬Å"devil sick of sunâ⬠face in Dulce. This imagery is so contorted it is unearthly, and seemingly impossible ââ¬â just as the devil bec oming tired of sinning is impossible. Owen's verbal images are parallel to artwork of the time, in particular Otto Dix's Assault Under Gas, shown below. In this art piece, Dix mirrors the tortured, hellish scenes of Dulce, with the cries of ââ¬Å"Gas!â⬠almost audible. The visual imagery suggests the mental effects of the attacks on the soldiers, highlighted by the colour grey ââ¬â as if life had been drained from them. Owen would have been aware of this, as he was treated at Craiglockhart Hospital for shellshock, amongst men whose ââ¬Å"slumbers were morbid and terrifying.â⬠In Futility, the image of the Sun is frequently used. It is often associated with life and its joys, however, Owen is very sarcastic in his reversal of the sun, first writing: ââ¬Å"If anything might rouse him now The kind old sun will know.â⬠Owen then goes on to criticise the Sun, labelling it as useless. He asks why we are created and given warm life, when war destroys everything of value: ââ¬Å"O what made fatuous sunbeams toil To break earth's sleep at all?â⬠Owen also adopts animal imagery to his poems to further the displayed messages. In Anthem, Owen's opening line contains the powerful simile comparing soldiers as those, ââ¬Å"who die as cattle?â⬠referring to the high numbers of dead soldiers, especially young soldiers, being cut down in their prime, just as cattle would. Owen suggests they were grown for a specific reason (to fight), and killed once they had met their purpose (being slaughtered on the battlefield). In Owen's first draft of Anthem, written, with guidance from Siegfried Sassoon, in Craiglockhart, he stressed the ââ¬Å"cattleâ⬠reference as an emotional jeer at the overly ambitious generals who used the men as cannon fodder. The parallel to animals is used to great effect. In Dulce et Decorum est, Owen details the men who ââ¬Å"had lost their boots, limped on, blood-shod.â⬠ââ¬Å"Bootsâ⬠and ââ¬Å"shodâ⬠remind us of the horses used in the war, who had iron-shod shoes ââ¬â portraying men as if they were beasts of burden, slumbering forward with heavy loads on their back ââ¬â the worry and terror of what would face them weighing the men down. We see the effects of such an affliction in Mental Cases, where the ââ¬Å"jaws that slob their relishâ⬠disparage ââ¬Å"us who dealt them war and madnessâ⬠by ââ¬Å"pawingâ⬠. Such quotes accentuate the dehumanisation of these men that once ââ¬Å"sang their wayâ⬠, signalling the end of their transition into ââ¬Å"rockingâ⬠wrecks. Owen recreates the horrors of war through his gruesome graphic imagery, particularly in Dulce's ââ¬Å"green seaâ⬠, where the ââ¬Å"flound'ringâ⬠of the victim ââ¬Å"smothersâ⬠his dreams. The realisation of such a sight is alarming to the reader. Even in Owen's time, such a description would shock the reader into picturing the ââ¬Å"sick of sin hanging faceâ⬠. Owen's passion displays the real effects of such a grim and ââ¬Å"monstrousâ⬠war, trying desperately to erase the false screen created by such jingoistic writers as Pope. One of Owen's tendencies is to incorporate intense sounds to support the potent imagery: ââ¬Å"We were caught in a tornado of shellsâ⬠This extract, from one of Owen's letters, provides insight into his writing of Anthem: ââ¬Å"The shrill, demented choirs of wailing shellsâ⬠Owen uses his ââ¬Å"submerged memories of warfareâ⬠to great effect, frequently applying onomatopoeia to his poems ââ¬â the ââ¬Å"stuttering rifle's rapid rattleâ⬠in Anthem, and the ââ¬Å"batter of gunsâ⬠in Mental Cases. The powerful resonance of the weapons intensifies the empathy the reader has for the ââ¬Å"sacrificed menâ⬠, as the hellish scene recreates the ââ¬Å"rattlingâ⬠in our own ears, as if we, the reader, were there. In Futility, a direct contrast is apparent, as the ââ¬Å"whispering of fields at homeâ⬠signifies the sharp difference between the frontline action, and the calmness of Blighty. This is a stark reminder from Owen that, whilst everything's fine and calm in Britain, there are ââ¬Å"full-nervedâ⬠men dying in France. The continuation of Anthem's onomatopoeic clatters is mirrored most notably by Mental Cases' ââ¬Å"batter of guns and shatter of flying musclesâ⬠. The rhyming extends Owen's vivid ideas by suggesting that, as well as fighting and seeing the misery of comrades falling, the sounds of the ââ¬Å"multitudinous murders they once witnessedâ⬠replay constantly in their minds, reminding them of the torment they met. In Dulce, we can ââ¬Ëhear' the ââ¬Å"guttering chokingâ⬠and ââ¬Å"garglingâ⬠of the ââ¬Å"hanging faceâ⬠, as well as visualize the grotesque scene, subjecting the reader to view the true nature of war further. As well as applying haunting adjectives to his work, Owen utilizes pace to maintain his high level of passion. This is most evident in Dulce, where each verse is different in speed. The opening verse is drawn out -very slow ââ¬â with long, elongated vowels and verbs completing the stanza, ââ¬Å"lameâ⬠, ââ¬Å"lostâ⬠and ââ¬Å"coughingâ⬠. This mirrors the fatigue of the soldiers, who would be deprived of sleep and be very slow in their speech. As the poem progresses into the gas attack, a pacy, urgent tone is adopted, with the cries of ââ¬Å"Gas! Gas! Quick, boys!â⬠As Owen describes the gas victim's painful end, the solemnly spoken words are slower, reverting back to the lingering sounds of the first verse, ââ¬Å"writhingâ⬠. In Anthem, the ââ¬Å"passing bellsâ⬠of the funeral suggests a slow, sombre tone, as is the case with funerals. However, with the ââ¬Å"bugles callingâ⬠and the ââ¬Å"wailingâ⬠, the mournful mood is lost, just like the youth of Britain. Owen often ends his poems with an accusatory conviction, a controversial one that projects his innermost feelings, chosen to express the untold truths about war, and how the patriotic campaigns to conscript men are disgraceful. In Anthem, Owen ends with: ââ¬Å"Their flowers the tenderness of patient minds, And each slow dusk a drawing down of blindsâ⬠This is a direct contrast to the whole poem, where Owen suggests the ââ¬Å"monstrous anger of the gunsâ⬠accompanies them in death. Instead of his habitual ending of a ââ¬Å"Lieâ⬠, Owen's ending is surprisingly peaceful, displaying a compassion for the dead previously unseen in his other poems. Mental Cases, Futility and Dulce, however, all oppose the somewhat ââ¬Ëupbeat' ending. Dulce ends with ââ¬Å"The old Lie: Dulce et decorum est Pro patria mori.â⬠Owen flat out accuses the old saying, and the certain poetess, that to die for your country is not sweet and meet. Owen even goes as far as ironically rhyming ââ¬Å"gloryâ⬠and ââ¬Å"moriâ⬠, as to satirically jeer at Jesse Pope, completely contradicting her. Owen asks if ââ¬Å"my friend, you would not tellâ⬠¦the old Lieâ⬠, passionately addressing the reader, but also the frank direction at Pope not to print her jingoes, ironically donning her ââ¬Å"friendâ⬠. This mirrors the ending to Mental Cases, where a sharp change of address sees the blame of the ââ¬Å"extricationâ⬠shift to ââ¬Å"us who dealt them war and madnessâ⬠. Owen deliberately develops the poem to the startling climax, enveloping the blame around society as a whole, and not just certain poetesses. Dulce and Mental Cases match in descriptions, where the futile attempts to ââ¬Å"pickâ⬠and ââ¬Å"snatchâ⬠combine to provide the reader with an overwhelming sense of grief, at having sent these men off to war. Owen's ideas mean that we, the modern reader, feel this guilt at having sent innocent youths to their untimely deaths, when we had done nothing. However, contextually, the reader would have read this, and known that they had done wrong, becoming guilt-ridden at their mistake. This is similar to Futility, where Owen accuses the ââ¬Å"fatuous sunbeamsâ⬠of wasting human life, agreeing with the Doomed Youth title, but opposing its final lines. Futility describes how men are killing others, ending life, when we should not be ordering the termination of it ââ¬â undoing God's work, when it is not our right to. Owen's feelings towards death, and the ending of life, are the fundamental issues in his poems. In Dulce, Owen is constantly comparing young with old, ââ¬Å"bent double, like old beggarsâ⬠and ââ¬Å"knock-kneed, coughing like hagsâ⬠. Dulce also details how the men ââ¬Å"marchedâ⬠¦drunk with fatigueâ⬠, explaining the exhausted state of the men. These three quotes are shocking, as these men are young, energetic men, but they're being reduced to quivering wrecks ââ¬â suggesting men age quicker in the trenches, due to the horrors they see, and what they have to experience. This is a direct juxtaposition, where the young are dying before the old (A role reversal), but are seen as being ââ¬Ëold' themselves. Owen's visual ideas on death are nothing short of morbid, describing: ââ¬Å"at every jolt, the blood Come gargling from the froth-corrupted lungsâ⬠In Dulce and Mental Cases, Owen adopts a macabre approach to extend the demons of these men. In Dulce, the ââ¬Å"white eyesâ⬠of the ââ¬Å"hanging faceâ⬠suggest death is upon the man, and that he is looking at the men to choose his next victim. This idea is carried into Mental Cases, where there are men ââ¬Å"whose minds the Dead have ravishedâ⬠. Owen suggests, through a conviction of anxiety, that death is omnipresent, and that the worst fear is to become a ââ¬Å"purgatorial shadowâ⬠. Owen writes to display one main conviction: that the false pretences of war are just that ââ¬â false. By writing about such shocking and disturbing issues, Owen breaks the fabricated lies and makes his feelings known by adding ambiguous sentences to his poems, ââ¬Å"marching asleepâ⬠ââ¬â fatigue of war, or asleep to the glorious propaganda that recruited them? Owen's poems are full of truths, however controversial they seem, and he projects his convictions and feelings any way he can, regardless of consequences.
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